If you shook me
I wouldn’t feel it
If you whispered to me
I wouldn’t hear you
Cause I’m in the clouds
Dancing to a song
That only I
Can hear
An opiate of mine
A ridiculous obsession
And addiction so sweet
To be on my own
Jaded
Burned
Left out
But I don’t care
The ultimate
Seclusion
But seclusion
By choice
1 comment:
i think if in the first stanza you had "if you shook me, i wouldn't feel you, if you whispered to me, i wouldn't hear you" it might sound better. a suggestion.
i like image of someone dancing on a cloud.
very powerful last stanza.
i too really like this one. it just...gives you a peaceful, drifting feeling. no thought to the consequences.
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